Yuck.. You need improvement =P I dont recommend using brushes for anything except for clipping masks. It really looks like you just used some brushes and slapped a render on there (Ok, maybe a lil more then that..).... Theres a few tuts on this site (I've made a video one myself::In the video section:... Good luck!
no offense but I would stick to desktops... you proly used a couple brushes on the background used some layer effects...and the pasted a render. not only does it lack any skillful effects you can see through the render... I would suggest some tutorials and just practice...
I kinda like it... Although it's still eh I don't think it's as bad as everyone's saying. Don't worry you'll improve =) Spoiler Edit: Yes CAVALIER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!