Criticism

the background looks like it just got jacked, and the the name thing oscillating in between the two sides looks like badly done, because what you need is for it to like fade in and out, or what you need is for it to have some quickness to it, but not cover the background at every point in time....

 

Ok let me start off by saying the animation is ok, one thing is on a scan bar never put a name or emblem it looks bad. The background is not much of anything looks like a gradient map overlay on a halo picture you took. When you make a sig or what ever you want to focus on making a clear render that sticks out but isn't jsut sitting on top of the background. For example Sdrakulich's sig is a good example of a render sitting on top of a background no offense but it is. You want to render to blend but not be the same color and look like the background, right now your pic looks like a jumbled mess. For some good tutorials and stuff, go to Planet Renders.net no space. It has a lot of render and in the forum it has a load of tutorials to help you on your photoshop journey.