GWS, this isn't a competition. Just a little branch of SOTW Stock Specific I guess. And thats pretty sweet Mallet. You seem to have a similar style to Convulse. Thanks for entering Sushi. Yours is very good as well.
Its not really a contest. Its more of a thread too learn from because you can see everyone's style on the same image and get better ideas for your own.
Anyway, if you could give me suggestions or anything for me to improve on my style, post 'em here: http://www.forgehub.com/forum/graphics-arts/30717-i-can-haz-photoshop-nao-d.html