What is missing?

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by SPAGETTII, Aug 26, 2008.

  1. SPAGETTII

    SPAGETTII Ancient
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    Here is a new Bob Dylan sig I made, I can't figure out what is missing. I am not very pleased with the way it turned out. Constructive criticism is appreciated. thanks

    I wanted it to be a SQUARE so don't worry about telling me that it's not traditional sig style


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  2. Norlinsky

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    The background is pretty bland, and the smudges do not work at all.
     
  3. Smeagle

    Smeagle Ancient
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    A good signature, just kidding. The bars you did dont really flow. Try to shorten them as you go from left to right. To sort of outline Dylan. I like it though. Better than your old ones.
     
  4. Mr. Moustache

    Mr. Moustache Ancient
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    The background goes poorly with the subject. Not the best pic of Bob Dylan either, should get a better quality close up rather than the current pose.
     

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