.Core Extensive Critique

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  1. XX_Blivion

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    oooo im next!!

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  2. Dizfunky

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    sexy or wut?
     
  3. Smeagle

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    XX Blivion:

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    -First of all, you are getting much better. For some simple steps, move the render to the left a little to cover up some of the bright white on the BG. Secondly, add a light source to increase the feeling the render was on the BG already. Good text, but place it a little higher. Having text in the corner brings a little too much attention away from the focal. Smudging on the BG is good, but smudge the persons "wings" a little outwards. Just to make it blend a little more.
     
  4. ZCT

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    whata bout me?...
     
  5. Smeagle

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    You didnt post anything. You just said how bout it or something. You didnt state anything to be critiqued.
     
  6. XX_Blivion

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    actually please do this one.. lol V5
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  7. Smeagle

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    Sorry, just take into consideration what I said earlier.
     
  8. ZCT

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    Um i meant, would you critique the siggy...
     
  9. Smeagle

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    Paranormal:

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    -There is some pretty good smudging here, but the tan color in the middle is a little too solid. Its kind of like he's against a solid object instead of a smudged BG. The gradient is kind of bad because the blur on the right seems like a cut-out of the BG. Its very easy to see the focal, and thats a good thing. But I think you should have blurred the edges of the render a little. This will add greatly to the smudged arms. Text is OK, but nothing special. Try placing the sub-text FF-XII In smaller letters below your name.
     
  10. Juggernaut

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    Quick question Norlinsky, for the technical area of the signature (right side), did you use brushes and if so could you link me that brush pack? Thanks.
     
  11. Stoj

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    TBH, I think this is a pretty bad thread idea - we all have our own thread ideas and I think you aren't THAT experienced to be critiquing other people's work.

    Sorry dude....
     
    #32 Stoj, Aug 25, 2008
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  12. Norlinsky

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    Stoj, I think it's more about the idea of releasing your sig to the public before it's completely done. Like, you want to know if people like it. And I trust .Core because he makes some very nice sigs.
     
  13. LOCK.xcf

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    nomnomnomnomnnnnnnom

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  14. Mashellis

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    hey what do you think of these

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  15. QKT

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    stoj is right
    sigs arent like maps. if you show someone and ask for advice its not really your work anymore
     
  16. Smeagle

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    OK, heres the thing Stoj. There are alot of people on this site who aren't that great at sigs. I thought I'd make this thread in order to help them get better. If the pros need some critique, then so be it. At no point did I state "I was the best and Im gonna show these noobs whats up" Also, I can't do all these reviews myself. And I am currently looking for a partner.

    EDIT: Mashellis, maximum of 2 at a time please.
     
  17. LOCK.xcf

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    ooooooooooo mE!

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  18. Smeagle

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    OK, then you will do some too. Ill review the 2 you posted. And you can do the others, for now.
     
  19. LOCK.xcf

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    ook, this shall be funnn

    make it . CoredownN
     

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