"Freedom Forever" is way too big. Dont have it overlapping the focal. And for the other text, make it a lighter shade of red, directly under main text. (Freedom Forever)
Well the Freedom forever peice is kinda the overtone of the film. So I made it the focal directly. V (what your calling the focal) is a masked mysterious person, So sinking him in to the image just felt better to me. And the subtext. I messed with it for a while. The reds blend to much, I would have to stroke it to make you be able to read it at all. Thanks though, I may try sizing down the Main Text. But im not sure.
Well, I asked for suggestions, So I value your opinion. After working on this I was satisfied with it, so I am not going to change it, but I like to hear the ideas, Because it helps me develop my style more.