Episode 1 [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3TbZH8xYvL4&feature=PlayList&p=9DD6820DF5F5D6A5&index=1[/youtube] Episode 2 [youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4t2N6g-aSKc&feature=PlayList&p=9DD6820DF5F5D6A5&index=2[/youtube]
ugh... why. why. why. Voice acting was horrible, camera angels were bad, screen transitions were a pain. And the covenat at one base, and humans at one base on valhalla has already been done buy treesunk productions, Outpost isil, witch is in turn based off rvb. Sorry for bad feedback.
Ok this was really bad...I would definitly not watch an episode 3. If you are planning on making one here are some tips. Voice Acting---It was horrible. It sounded like you were holding the mic right in front of your face and then just talking. Try holding it under your mouth or chin that way you wont get as many of those pops and hisses when say a word with a P or S. Plus you wont get that extremely annoying breathing noise. Also, try to keep the volume levels consistent. There were a few points where it was soft then got really loud. And another where someone screamed and I felt like punching a baby. PS the elites sounded like they were whispering... Camera Angles---Every seen cloverfield...Well your camera movements were kinda like that...Only 10 times worse. About the angles though...Way to far away and try not to move the camera around...Instead just switch which way the camera is facing...Like with two scenes...It may take longer but it will look much better. Story---Totally unoriginal and not funny. You were trying way to hard to be funny, especially with caboose....I mean whatever is name his. Yeah about that...try not to copy other machinimas characters *cough cough* RedvsBlue *cough cough* Plus Delta Squad...seriously...very unoriginal. And the old Oh no Elites are attacking the Spartans on the opposite base has been done and killed many times. Yeah work on editing too.... Also....Work on the sound...add sound effects because when that hornet was flying all I heard was horrible singing that wasnt funny. I though hornets made noises.... Keep working on it