Foundry Golf Hole #2

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Aesthetic Maps' started by blakeyPoo, Aug 21, 2008.

  1. blakeyPoo

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    Hey, This is the best map I've ever made I got inspired when I saw the featured map Ghost Golf: WH, which I highly recommend I asked him if he wanted to make a map with me but there was no response so I went on and started my own map by myself I hope you like it.

    The map also has a golf cart (Mongoose) which I forgot to take a pic of. :(

    The map consists of Driver's (Gravity Hammers) and Putters (Swords)

    The map has a Tee along with a Soccer ball as the Golf Ball.

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    (As you can see there is a lot of choices on where you want to hit the ball think smart)

    This may be one of the paths you might have chosen, you will be rewarded with a slope but punished with a hill that may cause some problems.

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    Both paths lead right here:

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    Again:

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    Here is the picture of how the par is marked, this hole is a Par 5

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    And the Last pic is what the map looks like from the outside:

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    As you can see this map took some time and I really hope you enjoy it, as you can see it is Show but it can be played on, I really hope you enjoy it.

    There is no specific gametype to use for this map but which ever one you may wanna put unlimited ammo on.

    Special Thanks to: IVIr Brundogg for helping with this hole.

    Also If you are expierenced with forge and loved my map please hit me up because I am willing to make a 9 hole course, I just need a partner to do it with me :)

    Download HERE :) Please Comment And Criticize
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    #1 blakeyPoo, Aug 21, 2008
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  2. mitona

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    i will make a hole in one. lol probably physically impossible but i shall be the first. ::downloading::
     
  3. blakeyPoo

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    Not impossible lol just gotta know the ways of the map just try all different paths...the lowest Ive ever gotten is a 2...but we will see what you can do,also if anyone gets a Hole in one record it and send it to me I wanna see lol
     
  4. Kilamanjara14

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    Ill help you with 9 hole course if you want I am a pretty descent forger from what I can tell from people replying on my maps

    GT- Kilamanjara14
     
    #4 Kilamanjara14, Aug 21, 2008
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  5. Joen@thanishere

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    it looks cool, but in some of the pictures there are some stuff that are a tiny bit crooked, but still i say 4/5
     
  6. TheDarkKnight05

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    Golf looks really cool in foundry. The idea is great and the interlocking looks clean. Good Job
     
  7. blakeyPoo

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    Well thanks I was all by myself and I didnt feel like redoin everything...

    but where is there anything crooked in the pics?
     
    #7 blakeyPoo, Aug 21, 2008
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  8. DxHydra

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    and you accually used interlocking and stuff usually when a guy makes a mini game map the say *screw it its not saposed to be pretty* props for you for taking some time on it
     
  9. blakeyPoo

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    Thanks it too a while, but people are pretty picky on this site, I guess some stuff was crooked, you have any idea how long it took to interlock all that :(
     
  10. ZOMG

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    Ill make a hole in one. i will go into forge and carry the soccerball into the hole. no lol jk but ya great map. 5/5
     
  11. blakeyPoo

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    Thanks I really appreciate it...:)
     
  12. zoner117

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    This map looks good with all of the interlocking. Nice idea and it actually looks fun. I like the layout and floor and will download. 5/5 Keep Forging!
     
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  13. DonkeyKong

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    Hey I'm new to this site and I was looking for a fun map to play by myself. Your map just answered my cries. I almost got a hole in 4!. you have great, slick, clean fusions in your map. 5/5
     
  14. Anime Puppet

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    this map is great! very clean interlocking great job 4.5/5
     
  15. sexy dude

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    i DL the first and really liked it and this one looks really good well done on the map
     
  16. Pennywiez

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    it could have been made a little better but i like golf maps since i play it myself
     
  17. xFr1ct10nx

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    it looks fun and i really like having 2 paths. a bit sloppy maybe a v2? or make a #3? great job. 4.5/5
     
  18. blakeyPoo

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    There may be a v2...but I know there are some parts that are needed to be fixed :(
     
  19. goldenknight508

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    This is a really cool map. I like the look of it. Here's my review:

    Aesthetics: The map looks good from the inside, which is good. It looks sloppy in some areas, but that won't greatly affect you. I like the use of the tee, thats a plus. But the map looks good, and inescapable, and thats good. Just fix some stuff up, but other than that, great looks. 7/10

    Originality: Here is the bad news. This isn't very original. I've seen at least 20 golf maps, and Ghost Golf is by far the best. But you get a plus on the tee and the lights for the par. So i give originality a 5.5/10.

    Overall: I like the map, and its not too bad. Just work on another version, because you have potential. Sorry if I came off as harsh, but I was brutally honest. I would have scored you higher on originality had the map surpassed ghost golf. Overall score is a 6.25/10. Keep forging!


    -The golden Review
     
  20. L3377MA573R

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    Pretter cool, but it looks like the area where the ball spawns, is exactly the same as the Ghost Golf. It's as if you just took that and built a course around it. And it does look more like a mini-golf course, but still, pretty cool.
     

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