two identical ships with auto-firing cannons.great for team gametypes. Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing
you use a sight like photobucket uploaded your screenshots there than post the image code of the screenshots on your post
Map is very sloppy, it lacks interlocking and the walls are not even angled properly. Though this is your first map, I'm giving you a 2/5 at best. Sorry.
I hear that a lot from people who only want to concentrate on one thing and leave everything else sloppy. It doesn't matter if your map is going under the aesthetics section, or if it's going under competitive. They are still going to be looked at by people, and that means you should be doing your best to make your map look like you have planned. That means interlocking, geo-merging (where needed), and the other forging techniques used to make maps.
umm why are there things that i make for fun in an actual map? oh and also i cant see where you are going with this map so 2/5
This looks mega sloppy. While the fusion coil shooting is somewhat cool, you should try to make it look as nice as possible. Most people on forgehub use interlocking in all of their maps. Also you should try to use boxes to make sure that walls are 90 degrees from the ground. Also, don't double post, you can edit your first.
Sloppy map but great idea. Make everything stand better and add more aesthetics in and you will be done. 5/5