First Abstract Stripe

The colors look horrible. Try making them not so solid. I do like the squares though. Mostly because I cant use it.

 

The colors seem... hard in color. As if applied using paint, especially with that spray transition between colors. The best way is to use a smooth gradient instead, and just make them blend.

 

Ya, I don't have the time right now too make one too show you, but all the colors are one solid one, make them different shades so they shade into each other.

 

Make them brighter, happier...in a sense, gayer. It just looks better than those colors.

 

hmm i don't really like the blending of colors or more how they blend you think you could clear that up?

 

yesh, a hotter pink and sexier light blue.

 

haha... i stole your idea

 

what do you think of mine?

 

your supposed to say that in my thread... haha