The Dawn

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Aesthetic Maps' started by Huntar, Aug 16, 2008.

  1. Huntar

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    NAME: The Dawn

    CREATOR'S: huntaro002, I Caught Fire08, Golden slave111

    DESCRIPTION:The final ending scene of the last mission, " HALO "

    PICTURE'S:

    Looking in.
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    The runway.
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    The jump in.
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    Barely making it.
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    looking out.
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    Overview.
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    MAP.
    VIDEO.



    REMEMBER: Have fun!!! d:
     
    #1 Huntar, Aug 16, 2008
    Last edited: Aug 17, 2008
  2. NeonStalker

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    So it is meant to be like the end of Halo when you gun it into the ship?

    It looks awesome. Maybe you can find a way to add more special effects too, to make it more epic.

    4/5
     
  3. Dr. Chombie

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    i've never seen anyone make the ending of the last level before so good job for that but it looks just a little sloppy and like neon said maybe you could add more special effects to make it even better
     
  4. Huntar

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    yea its supposed to be like the ending of " HALO "
     
  5. the littel pony

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    Good idea. But I agree with darkmaster, it does look a bit sloppy. and i don't think a few little explosions are enough. Get creative and it it'll look a lot better.

    Why avalanche though? It doesn't match the exploding stuff in the sky at all.

    EDIT: Oh, and huntaro- you aren't aloud to comment on your own thread.
    At least that'shat I was told.
     
  6. Huntar

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    i chose avalanche for one reason only... it's huge! so you have allot of room to work with. and i see that i could have done the ramp and design a little bit neater. But the inside is really smooth and flawless. thanks for the suggestions.
     
  7. stin10

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    of course your allowed to comment on your own post. what idiot told you that. your just shouldn't double post. now one the the map. i guess its a cool idea and its origonal, but it does look a little messy, and you would only do it like once, and then you'd get bored of it and delete of your maps.
     
  8. PingPongLegend

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    cool idea to make like an epic finishing thing
    you should prob fix up the ramp there are some gaps and what not
    but nice post, good map
     
  9. M.Jelleh

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    This looks rather sloppy. You should try some interlocking. I like the concept though. One suggestion to make it funny, at like 20 seconds, make some grav lifts and mancannons spawn and push you out of the ship. That would be freakin hilarious!
     
  10. Wingsofhalo

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    Pretty good its just a little sloppy could use some work 3/5.
     
  11. drak

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    way to be original dude!!!

    5/5 for that

    aesthetics is 4/5

    overall, 5/5!!!
     
  12. Monolith

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    lol, nice ideas. The ship seems really in depth, dlded and 4/5
     
  13. adam2by4

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    Infection maybe

    What if zombies spawned behind them and to have a chance to survive you have to get to the dawn before they kill you!
     
  14. rewib65

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    ok, im gonna be real honest, this map is bad, there isnt much actual playability, most people will get sick of it pretty quickly. and the aesthetics are really bad too, the ramp thing isnt even straight, the ship just looks like a pile of boxes, this map needs a lot of work.
     
  15. brett3123

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    That just reminds me of when my friends and I got the once achievement where you need to finish in ghosts. 5/5
     
  16. SIX BABIES

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    You could try floating a sentinal beam with a small wall to look like sentinals maybe?
     
  17. thesteven00

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    I like the idea but it cold use some interlocking, and the ramp is a bit sloppy
     
  18. D4ni3l G

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    like the idea. you could make various filters activate with timers to make it look epic
     

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