A good map, i would say, i like the way everything is set up, i really dont think it is that sloppy to tell you the truth. and people... these are just pictures, you really have to play a map before you can really judge it, these pics are just structural pictures, not interior screen shots, i've played this map myself with the creator,xMiDgEt MaN92x, so i would know first hand, on how this map really is...(sorry xMiDgEt MaN92x if i made a scene here, and im also sorry for typing what im apologizing about) c[=
I never use that and always have enough money but anyway I would also say a 1/5 theres no interlocking and very little idea of how the map is supposed to flow you go somewere and are stuck for lack of cover and also if it was just a draft say so or don't post it because if you didn't spend a little time on it your going to get abosutly horrible reviews... good luck with V.2 though.
I like the general layout of the map but seems a bit sloppy try some interlocking if you dont know how there are many forging tutorials on the home page look for Forging 101 link.