Constructive Criticism Please.

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Mikey, Aug 12, 2008.

  1. Mikey

    Mikey Guest

    Pardon me for making one of these threads but I want to know how I can make this signature better:

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    Should I add something?
    Should I take away something?
    Should I change the color of something?
    Should I resize the render?
    Etc...

    Feedback and criticism is appreciated, thank you.
     
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  2. CaMOfo

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    Is the orange out of the box going to be transparent?
     
  3. LOCK.xcf

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    i have told you i reall like it, and i do, but you should maybe make the colors of the olympic ring normal, instead of orange
     
  4. !nikheizen

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    I think it's a great comment on the commercialization of the Olympics.
    the chick is a bit pixely tho, try using a simple gaussian blur of a few pixels
    see what blue looks like
     
  5. Smeagle

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    Yeah, the olympics rings are the only thing I see wrong. With this, you'll most likely win the SOTW. Youve got my vote anyways.
     
  6. The Effected

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    Mikey, I like your sigs but I'm gonna be pretty honest here. The rings look like ****. They look horribly pixelated and the colors on them look bad. The person's leg being cut off outside of the border look strange and kinda bugs me, also the "iBelieve" seems like an ipod parody and is kinda bad.
     
  7. Mikey

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    Well I will definitely change the color of the rings then, and add a gaussian blur to the render.

    There is really nothing I can do about the leg being cut off =|.

    The iBelieve is not really supposed to be a parody, because it is serious; Believe in yourself.
     
  8. !nikheizen

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    Make sure to keep the blur on the lower side of pixel blurring, it should still look solid.
     
  9. Mikey

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    Okay, I blurred the render a bit, then made the logo blurred a bit and colored.
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    As Turbo suggested, here it is in a different color:
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  10. !nikheizen

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    You may want to consider painting over it with a small brush in black to get the black render stuff perfect.
    Try out what the background looks like in Ice blue.

    I like it, and I'm voting for you so far.
     
  11. LOL zombie

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    The leg thats in the sig, is a bit pixely. Brush over it or make a very small path is an easy fix.
     

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