Savior Trailer

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  1. soccerholic1816

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    Hello all!
    Below is a link to the trailer/pilot episode of the all new machinima mini-series, Savior. It is the story of one man returning home after a long voyage in space, only to find that the world he once knew and love is utterly deserted. What happened? Where did everyone go? These are the questions that our hero must answer in order to find the biggest answers of all – is he alone? Can he save the human race? Only time will tell. So, without further adieu, I present to you Savior, the trailer.

    YouTube - Savior Trailer

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5627ohWu6xs
     
    #1 soccerholic1816, Aug 7, 2008
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  2. SargeantSarcasm

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    jesus christ dude...

    usually i hate machinima posted here...but I really liked the feel you are going for (and that opening shot is something i was planning on using for mine :C )

    anywho, the camera angles were superb and the overall setting is good
    the only problem I had with this is your voice, i know its supposedta be told from the perspective like you've been long lonely and whatnot, and you're not going to be all peppy or expressive towards relating your story, but it should still show emotion rather than the sort of apathy you displayed in your voice... it might be your mic but im not entirely sure

    but from what i've seen, you've done a great job, keep it up, and make sure to post any subsequent entries in the series when you have em...
     
  3. Mysterious D

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    Sarge is right, this is outstanding! It's the kind of thing that I have running through my head, but I have no way of catching it all and putting in down in paper before it gets away from me... Honestly, Kudos.

    And I liked the narrator's voice, it had hope in it mixed with the apathy; hope to find someone else, even though he has accepted himself as "the last of his kind"?
     
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    Dude. That looks really good. If you ever need a meat puppet, hit me up. I love the premise of this.
     
  5. soccerholic1816

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    Thanks guys for the compliments and the criticism.

    I believe the main problem with the voice is the microphone, which will hopefully be fixed sometime in the near future.

    The next episode should be out sometime in the next week if everything goes according to plan.

    Thanks again!
     
  6. PonyD

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    Ummm there is NO link buddy, you may have had one earlier but for some reason... It is gone...

    Cant view your video
     
  7. Thorax tehGREAT

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    where is the link please highlight it or something
     
  8. soccerholic1816

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    Sorry guys, there was one ealier, i dont know what happened. Edited
     
  9. FreshCherry

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    omg this looks like it is going to be REALLY good!!!! cant wait lemme know when it is out
     
  10. Thorax tehGREAT

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    ya i watched at that was tight looks good when will it be out
     
  11. soccerholic1816

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    Unknown at this time, it was originally intended to be out the 31st (obviously) but the editor ran into some serious problems, that we are just working out now. So hopefully sometime in the next week.
     
  12. PonyD

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    Isnt that the scripted speech from "I am Legend" with Will Smith?
     
  13. Seanroc2

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    um...

    If it is, it would be a huge coincidence. I saw the movie, but I never intentionally copied it.
     
  14. KB

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    Man I cannot wait to see how this comes out!!! This is gonna be uber epic! The only thing i would suggest is that add some music underneath your voice... It kinda got a little boring in the middle when you would just talk and there were silent moments... Other than that great job and keep us updated on the series!
     

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