mg:mg:mg:mg:mg:ITS UPmg:mg:mg:mg:mg: WarFare My first halo 3 machinima. Very small story, kinda funny please put good or constructive comments . In my first attempt to make a machinima, i make a recruit who messes with a general and plays him 1v1. He goes thru extensive training ti fight the general. Will he win? watch to find out VIDEO HERE ITS A MUST WATCH LOLOLOLOL
thx man, i couldnt get my voice really really deep and make it sound normal at the same time so it sounds kinda weird
I know you were trying to be funny and what not, but the voices just made it not stick out to me. The head bobbing was way off, and it was really annoying watching the white guy move around the whole time while talking to the elite at the beginning. The editing wasn't the greatest either. And when the white guy went to kill all those other people at the beginning they werent even shooting at him back, so it looked pretty strange. But anyways, keep making more and for sure you will be better.
Try embedding your video also like so http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XXh27YIL3EU&fmt=18 just add tags around it.. Overall im giving it a 4/10 for the same reasons rentless pointed out. Take your time when making your machinimas, try to see other peoples machinimas and try to kinda get an idea on how to edit your videos.