Onyx

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by Ragnarok04, Aug 5, 2008.

  1. Ragnarok04

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    Welcome to my second map: Onyx.

    When I first wanted to make this map, I wanted it to have a theme, I didn't want it to be "Just another forged foundry map" So the theme that came to mind the fasted was a research lab. Also I wanted players to feel like the map was captivating, so I added thee power cores to compliment the theme of the map and at the same time be visually stunning and make the player feel like they weren't in "just another forged foundry"

    But anyways, here are a couple of pics to give you an idea:


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    And heres the link to download it:
    Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing


    I hope you all enjoy! (And yes before I get flamed I still kinda use other peoples idea a little) Please comment.
     
  2. FreshCherry

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    for you being a trainee, this is a pretty nice map. it is smooth and neat, the interlocking is perfect, and the gameplay is very good! 5/5
     
  3. mox rocker

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    wow this looks really good the interlocking looks good and it looks good to play on
     
  4. GD27 BlueDevil

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    Imaculate interlocking. The clean ness got my attention and is going to be the main reason I download. Best interlocking I have seen in a while...

    This map is really good for a junior member... or any member lol

    P.S.
    This is my 600 post!!!
     
  5. Ragnarok04

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    EDIT**
    I forgot to put the weapons info in my post so here you go:
    (Weapon)- (Palced on map)
    Battle Rifle- 15
    Rockets- 1
    Sniper- 1
    Shotgun- 1
    Assault Rifle- 6
    SMG- 4
    Magnum- 2
    Plasma Pistol- 1

    And there are two teleporters at the back of each base that put you near the center of the map.

    *IMPORTANT*
    This map is ONLY set up for Team games
    -Slayer
    -CTF
    -Oddball
    -King of the Hill

    Please send any bug reports to xxragnarok04xx@hotmail.com
     
  6. Orphanslayer92

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    The central structure looks amazing. Nice job interlocking a perfect circle. The map itself needs a little more cover but it looks pretty good.
     
  7. Pennywiez

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    the map looks pretty good, you went with your theme and the circle in the middle was greatly made
    great job!
     
  8. Bloumbas

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    i think this map is aweomse, for some one any level, interlocking is perfect, i love it. and onyx was a pokemon =)
     
  9. mapmaka27

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    wow! how did u get such a perfect circle?
     
  10. Ragnarok04

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    lol i got a perfect circle by switching the gametype to king of the kill and using the hill to line up my boxes
     
  11. Keitapath

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    Looks nice if not heavy on the Barriers, I'll try this one out. Great stuff - 4.5/5
     
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    lol thats what i do to :p it works really well
     
  13. Ragnarok04

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    haha works like a charm
     
  14. Mace

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    the interlocking is spotless and the map design is beutiful
    only thing i would change is take out some of the barriers and flip the bridges
     
  15. Zachary9990

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    Wow, this map looks beautiful. It looks like you've made just enough open space to keep anyone vulnurable but enough cover to get out of dodge. I really like your idea. I like how this map is astetically pleasing also, some are efficient but there just freakin ugly. Maybe on your next map though you could make a little paint program picture to show us the overall layout and weapon placement.
     
  16. Ragnarok04

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    Accutually I'm looking for someone to help me with my next map, I'd like to make something that MLG may consider pciking up. If your iinterested give me an email: xxragnarok04xx@hotmail.com or add my GT: R For Ragnarok
     
  17. W1ck3d Tr1ck

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    awesome rag you are seriously a god at forge.. haha later man
     
  18. TheSwamp015

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    map is alright, could use some work, i'd stick to taking screenshots instead of making maps cuz they look better than they really are, the swamp is not satisfied
     
  19. prepare4legend

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    wow an amazing my ill download for sure, oh and good use of merging XD only problem is the bridges on top of the power core make it look tacky
    4.5/5 very good idea, original and nice structure and layout
     
  20. xbrokenxangelx

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    this looks extremely well made and thought about, the only problem i see is a difficulty in getting to the small structure
     

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