Lockdown

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by xxTEMPESTxx, Aug 5, 2008.

  1. xxTEMPESTxx

    xxTEMPESTxx Ancient
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    Lockdown is a team slayer map made by TEMPEST 3 4.
    There are two bases at each end connected by a bridge, as well as a secondary structure next to both bases.
    The sniper rifle is the only power weapon.
    download here:
    Lockdown

    NOTE: i have been getting some good criticism on this map. but my halo disk is cracked right now. but when i get a new one expect a v2 with some signifigant changes.
    thanks- TEMPEST :]

    base and secondary structure
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    overview
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    overview with sniper spawn
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    #1 xxTEMPESTxx, Aug 5, 2008
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  2. ZANDER1994

    ZANDER1994 Ancient
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    The map name has been done way to many times. I'd suggest changing it. The map looks alright, but it would be nicer if you blocked off the two side parts (because they're not being used), flipped the bridges upside down and interlocked them into each other (it looks nicer and is more smooth) and maybe put more cover on the ground inbetween the bigger structures. Other than that, it looks good. Welcome to forgehub by the way. We hope you enjoy your stay.
     
  3. M.Jelleh

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    HMMMMM. I like the geometry of your map, but if you don't plan on using the back area of foundry I suggest you block it off. Also I suggest that you use the bottom of the bridges instead of the top for aesthetic quality. Finally I suggest that you beef up your post and add some more info about item placement and maybe some gameplay pics.
     
  4. HezbollaHector

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    nice first post, i think the maps cool but it just doesnt have that wow faactor. i would suggest flipping over the double boxes at each base. 4/5 keep forging!
     
  5. Mace

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    flip the bridges and try out goemerging
    nice interlocking
    more cover
    zander just about covered it all
    lol
     
  6. xxTEMPESTxx

    xxTEMPESTxx Ancient
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    hey thanks for the advice i will try that out.
    HOWEVER i don't know when i will be able to because my halo disk is cracked. but when i get a new one i will get right on it
    thanks- TEMPEST
     
  7. Zachary9990

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    I really like this map,but i believe that all the people above me were correct. And I can't tell, but i think the second floor open box that the bridge goes through doesnt have a back entrance and could be prone to camping. But i can't tell, maybe get a few more screenshots at different angles.
     
  8. CommanderA17

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    Umm...definitely not a piece of ****, but isn't too original. I'd recommend a DL if the map looks interesting to you. As for me, I've seen maps like this all too often.
     
  9. xbrokenxangelx

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    i like the map, but if you could please flip the bridges, and block the back, its unnecessary and unnatractive
     
  10. Orphanslayer92

    Orphanslayer92 Ancient
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    The map looks ok. I think you should have put something into the back part of foundry as you did not block it off. The interior of the map looks pretty good but I suggest you flip the bridges to make it smoother and add some cover. Also, the name is overused but whatever.
     
  11. Soviet Skibum

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    As Matt said already: the back area should either be blocked off or used in the map.

    To me it feels like you didn't finish the map. It's "done" but not finished if you understand what I mean. I think you should add more structure or expand on the ones you have(it seems like a lot of the forge pallet is left over). Other than that it looks like a great start to a great map.
     
  12. prepare4legend

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    4/5 on the idea but u need more structure too it and its too open =[ 3/5 overall
     

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