The game sounds very fun and very well explained. This would be exciting to play with a full team. My one problem is your forging. You might not notice is while you're playing, but it would really help set the mood if you cleaned up some of your roof panels and added some decorative items like weapon holder lining the hallways, or some inactive teleporter nodes.
All hail the starwars geek. lol jk. This looks fun and well thought out. I'll probably Dl when I get a chance. One suggestion though, you may want to make the course longer. it looks pretty long but it could be longer.
8/10. i like the concept. doesn't seem like you did a lot for the map. but its a good idea and so props for that.