Lander

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Aesthetic Maps' started by Pettifer7, Jul 27, 2008.

  1. Pettifer7

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    Lander
    Made by Pettifer7

    Description
    hello,
    this is the first posted map so i am open to criticism
    i'm only 12 and most people say the 10,11,12 year olds
    cant make good maps or post well but i'm about to prove them wrong

    Lander is a ship map on foundry and just so you all know i dont need to be told that its been done 50 times before
    The map Lander consists of,The ship, The control tower, Small parking lot,
    Tractor beam, and landing pad
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    This is the right side of the ship
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    other side of ship, srry for it being blurry plz dont spam about it
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    inside the ship 1 battle rifle leaning up against each box and RPG leaning on right box, srry for it being blurry plz dont spam about it
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    Tractor beam(will not be there if gametype is not king of the hill)
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    cockpit (srry not really detailed lol)
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    landing Pad has a 2 fork lifts on it 1 with a crate and 1 with 4 fusion coils
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    Spawn area it has 1 truck carrying a warthog and one carrying barrels and a dumpster
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    entrance 2 launch center
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    Launch center(has 2 snipers in it)
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    There are no images on bungie.net just here because i couldn't figure out how(plz dont spam about it)

    Weapons:
    sniper x 6 (2 are cannnons on the ship)
    battle rifle x 2
    rocket launcher x 1
    shotgun x 2
    sparten laser x 1 ( it is hidden so if u can find it pm me and i will add your name to post)

    I'm hoping to get a 4 or higher even though it is my first map on forge hub

    oh yes i almost forgot if u can think of a good name i will add it and add your name to the post

    Download Lander
     
    #1 Pettifer7, Jul 27, 2008
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  2. smoke n you

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    1st post really nice job with makeing a landing pad and a control tower .
    Welcome to forge hub also
     
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  3. Pettifer7

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    i dont know how they got blurry, did them all on photo bucket but those 2 just showed up like that i i couldn't fix them
     
  4. Kyoichi

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    Even though I love snipers, you can't bunch them up in a real combat map. It becomes a major, major camping spot. Also, try to spread out respawn points, overwise they become easy targets for spawn killing. The ship's roof looks sloppy. And most of it looks like it took about an hour or two.

    Sorry, but I'm basing my review on the pictures and information.

    In my personal opinon. Think about Version two. For now, 2/5
     
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  5. Smeagle

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    Did you save all your pictures the exact same way?
     
  6. Pettifer7

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    this map isn't meant to play games on its aesthetic
     
  7. Pettifer7

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    yes i saved them all the same way
    srry didnt mean two double post
     
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  8. Kyoichi

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    Still, it kinda ruins gameplay because of a nub camping with sniper the whole game.
     
  9. Pettifer7

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    u aren't supposed to play on it dude its just aesthetic(which means just 2 look at
     
  10. FordCalvin

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    nice 1st post, welcome to forgehub, and hey this is a great map.
    Hope to see more from you soon!
     
  11. Pettifer7

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    thanx calvin i might post another of my aesthetic or casual maps soon
     
  12. Pettifer7

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    got to go my old man is bugging me
     
  13. stin10

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    if its ascetics. than y r there weapons
     
  14. MibZ

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    Six Sniper Rifles do not make balance.
     
  15. Pettifer7

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    omg people stop talking about the weapons it does not matter if its balenced because it is aesthetic and i added weapons for decoration
     
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    Some of the screenshots are blurry ..
    But the map looks great from the rest of the screens !
    Good job! =]
     
  17. Pettifer7

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    thanx boydy
     
  18. Ali Legend

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    if its only aesthetic why is there a hill, indicating you are meant to play on KOTH? It looks alright but it doesn't strike me as amazing. I thi kyou should modify it a bit and turn it into a proper game.
     
  19. Revoltingmadman

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    wat i get from his posts
    is the gametypes are a bonus
    and therefore don't worry about them
    just tell him if you like the Aesthetic part of the map
    and i personally think its very creative but with time he will be posting stuff that would make you stare at it ok
    so sit back and watch a forger develope, and be supportive
    and this is not directed at anyone in particualar
     
  20. Pettifer7

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    thanxs madman
     

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