wow!... thats awful. I mean truely awful, this sucks period. Its a dead spartan, where's the humor, you're terrible caption makes it even worse too. No originality, no humor, this screenshot does not succeed.
Yeh, sorry to be so harsh, but it doesn't stand out to me, its just a picture of a dead spartan, as said above. Keep trying though, better luck next time.
Maybe a diferent angle would fix it, or if his hands were under his head or something like that. Keep trying, and maybe get a pic like my Hugz (Though That was my idea )
I think the gun kinda ruined it. Maybe if it was closer (like a foot away from his head on the side) it would be more funny. Sorry for the negative feedback.