the camera angle and backround are perfect for that picture, they make the 2nd monitor look a lot bigger rather than distinctly seperating the backdrop from the player. its actually a very nice composition. good job. it kinda reminds me of the giant sentinel (with all of the regular ones around it) that was supposed to be in Matrix Revolutions
IMO, the best monitor pic I've seen, because of the lack of old timey, it hi-res and as Sarge has said, excellent composition.
By far the best are you my daddy? picture. the lighting from the larger one has a great effect on the forge monitor. The angles is perfect, showing you just enough for it to be perfect.