Desolate V2

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Casual Maps' started by Papaqueso, Jan 18, 2008.

  1. Papaqueso

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    This is my first post here and one of my first "good" maps. This map is based off the move "I am Legend". In the beginning or "DAY" the humans can roam free and forage for leftovers in the town as well as fortifying their positions. After about a minute "DAY" turns to "NIGHT" and the zombies can come out and hunt. To start of Zombies are weak and can't do much, but once freed they have access to powerups which make them powerful.
    Each of the Human "BASES" has it own strengths and weaknesses, and the only thing left to say is "Dont' get caught out after dark"

    Link to map http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=16668656

    Link to Game Type http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=16668167&viewreplies=true


    The Bunker "BASE"
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    The Junkyard
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    The Warehouse "BASE"
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    The House
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    This is my first post so some feedback would be nice

    P.S sorry for the small images, I'm not really sure how to make them bigger

    *Edit* I made the pictures bigger thanks for helping me with that
     
  2. Lone Deity

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    I'm pretty sure the hotlink to forums link make them bigger.

    And some of the walls and such look a little sloppy.
     
  3. Papaqueso

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    That was my point, it is a post apocaliptic world were everything is dilapidated and run down, thanks for your feedback tho.
     
  4. TrueDarkFusion

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    You might want to straighten things up a little. Try using some of the Forging 101 tutorials in the navigation on the left to help fix the map up.
     
  5. Papaqueso

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    Thanks guys, I'm new to making maps, and ur advice really helps, i'm now working on straightening things out and will post the new map when its fixed
     
  6. ShadowSnip3r RC

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    I don't TDF or LON3 SOLD13R are forcing you to straighten out the sloppiness of your map. If it is indeed intended to look run down and aged than leave it as it is. What they are trying to say is that more people like neat and well organized maps that are not sloppy. However this map looks pretten barren to me. To make up for the run down feel that may disinterest people you should add more structures or put in more scenery. Good efforts though.
     
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    I agree with ShadowSnip3r. This is the one instance, where it actually makes sense to have crooked walls. It is supposed to look like things are falling apart. And i also agree that it needs more "stuff" to liven it up a bit. There is a slight difference between "barren" and "empty". It looks like you should have some money left over to throw some pallets, barrels, pylons, and such randomly around for effect.
     
  9. goldenknight508

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    The house looks a little sloppy, or is it supposed to be like that? Nice Psot anyways =)
     
  10. o2oGodsMistake

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    Dude dont worry about the jerks who tell you to straighten it out I love sloppy walls lol. To continue like the mutlipule base ideas with strenghts and weaknesses, also you could add a few things to have it look more post apocaliptic world like a run down shack thats really small and run down in the middle of town if you do get caught. And a few things to make it look like a town or more of a town
     

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