Rethought

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by AlexDaParrot, Jun 27, 2008.

  1. AlexDaParrot

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    Map Title: Rethought

    Description:

    Weapons:
    5 Carbine
    5 Battle Rifle
    1 Rockets (90 S Spawn) 2 Shots
    1 Sniper 1 Clip (60 S Spawn)
    1 Mauler (45 S Spawn) no extra Clips

    Supported Gametypes:
    Slayer
    Team Slayer
    King of the Hill
    Capture the Flag (Multiflag)

    Well, this is my first map. I did some geomerging and interlocking is quite apparent. This map is mainly for the BR lovers but also has a sniper at one end and rockets at the other for some fun. The map was inspired by me and I made the entire thing except the back wall which I took off my "Wall" canvas which I have from Onslaught.


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    Base 1
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    Snipe Tower
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    Middle
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    Rockets
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    Close Combat under the Rocket spawn (Look by the dumpster and yes that is an actual picture in a testing session, they also didn't notice eachother somehow and ran past eachother lol....)

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    #1 AlexDaParrot, Jun 27, 2008
    Last edited: Jun 27, 2008
  2. Kittycatwitcowboyhat

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    first post again! wow you pictures are to small for me to give you some ratings. make them bigger. but it still looks great. keep forging.
     
  3. GD27 BlueDevil

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    Save the bigger pic on Bungie. Ever since they changed the server I thought forgehub automatically changed the size. I'm not sure what went wrong.
     
  4. swiftarget1983

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    The pics are to small for me to see this map. I had the same problem before. When you save the pictures from bungie, make sure to click on them so you can see them in full view first, then upload them on to photobucket or imageshack, whichever one you are more familiar with. But you must save from bungie WHILE the picture is in full screen otherwise it will look very small, like it does now.
     
  5. AlexDaParrot

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    Pictures fixed. Hope you don't have to use a magnifying glass now :)
     
  6. Jump4h

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    interesting map, but i see some uneven object placement. like in the first pic those two bridges aren't quite parallel.
     
  7. this seems like your first post well done
     
  8. MattDGiant

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    This looks pretty good. However a lot of it is sloppy. For example. In the 3rd picture, that Sign A is crooked. In the 4th pic, the interlocked wall is tilted. Unless you did these things, and there are more then I mentioned, you should probably try and fix them. Otherwise it makes the map look rushed.
     
  9. AlexDaParrot

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    A sign was tilted to make it easier to jump up on. The wall in the 4th picture was tilted to the left to balance out the sniper tower being slightly more leftly and still to still make the walkways open.
     
  10. Beyond Skill198

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    This is the third new person in a row that I've seen post their map correctly. I'm impressed with the new members these days. Anyways, the map seems alright. I like the bases but over all I think you will need more to a map than just this to get people to download this.
     
  11. Y35 <3

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    okay, it does look like you really tried to put time into this map and interlock everything so it looked very neat, and it does, the only problem is the off-centering of most boxes
    i see that on the two sides, the bridges are not equal at all, one is small and the other is almost 2 bridges wide, on your center piece the sides arent level, and there was the walls that are tilted
    the map is good, you just need to spend a little more time on it
     
  12. Speed-e-cake

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    Looks fun, a great first map; however as stated before me it looks quite sloppy.
     
  13. Dr. Chombie

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    i agree just a little sloppy but looks interesting , however quite open
     
  14. sickandstoked

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    It is a very good start but it seems to me like something is missing here. You just need to add some creativity i guess to make it that much better.

    For example for the picture of the sniper tower. To me that does not look very attractive. My advice is to go through your map finishing those much needed details.

    But other then that, it's a great first post looking forward to your future maps.
     
  15. Da Pig

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    I like the idea but the map looks very sloppy. The map could have been made better. Though I like the idea and layout. 3/5
     

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