Synyster Gates.. C&C please

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  1. XX_Blivion

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    Hey guys.. I'm coming back to signature making..
    please give some constructive criticism on this one..

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    Its my first attempt at a real person signature..
     
  2. Mortarion

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    The background is good but the render doesn't really go with it. I'll try help you find a better one if you want :D

    I love A7X btw =]
     
  3. XX_Blivion

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    Ok.. id like that would be cool.. luckily i saved the psd..
    and yea A7X is a really good band
     
  4. xxAl Capwnagexx

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    I want to like it, but I can't. I don't even know what it is about it. It looks weird. I think its the c4d that you used (Assuming it is a c4d)
     
  5. XX_Blivion

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    actually i used 4 c4ds.. lol i tried to blend them together well but idk..
     
  6. nubsta

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    Damn dude, tbh, I'm not feeling it at all.
    First off, you added a bunch of C4D's to a canvas...theres no flow or blending in the C4D's. Find C4D's that work well together or don't use them at all. Besides, Having only C4D's in a background like that is just a no go. C4D's should be for depth and effects...not the entire b/g itself.
    The render looks like it was just added on. There's no blending and it doesn't match with the b/g at all. I'm sure if you had a nicer b/g it wouldn't be that big of a problem.
    And lastly, the text needs some work. Change the font, change the placement, blend it in more.
    The main thing I don't like about the signature is that it lacks flow and depth.

    Btw, I'm not tryna hate on your sig, you asked for criticism, and that's what I gave you. ;)
     
  7. XX_Blivion

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    Thanks.. yea next time i wont use just the c4ds as a background.. thanks for the C&C
     
    #7 XX_Blivion, Jun 29, 2008
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