this is a map designd for controling the frigate and i made it getting into the ship is kinda of like how you ended the campaign mode where you jump into the dawn NOTICE- i have not made this game compatible with any game Types so if you would like to set it up then feel free to do so PARTS OF THE SHIP -Engine Room -Mac Gun -Crews quarters -Armoy (no gunz) -Control Room -Hanger -Wing Compartment -Ramp to Base -Captains Quarters Heres Some Pics- Download Here- http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=20624304
your map looks great and has a great idea but in some of the pics the objects were crooked. I would recommend going back and straightening them out and also try interlocking. Other wise it looks great and i cannot wait to give a forge through.
The design is unique, pretty cool if you ask me. Yet, the cockeyed placement of boxes and ramps at key points in the structure of the ship (helm and aft), make the Pillar of Spring look like a melting ice sculpture after a Spring thaw. If you used another player's perspective when forging this ship again, I bet that you could get tremendous results. Look at my ship, Dreadnaught (lower on this forum page). I did this by myself, but I used another player's controller to let me see what the item I was placing actually looked like.
I like it, it seems to follow the trend of all the "Pillars Of...". It just seems like everyone is making Space Ships now. I feel safe in saying that I made the first, but I dont want to be arrogant. I think you did a great job, as people have said, things are crooked, but thats hard to perfect on things such as these (I am extremely guilty of this). Im interested to see how you did the MAC gun, because I was/am making a map like this (yeah I know im a huge hipocrite), and when I experimented with MAC guns, it worked, but not the way I wanted (the trajectory was always a little off)
yeah i know im not that good at making things straight in the air but groper i already downloaded your map before i made this. your map kinda gave me the idea to make a (piller ship) and its very good game varrient
oh and the mac gun is the banshee which is the picture showing the front of the ship on the right side top of the ship you do the turret through wall glitch then you usde the tele on the left outside to get back and the banshee is locked onto the ship
looks pretty sweet man i love the effect of black and whit and like some people you might want to straighten things out but overall good job 8/10
While I appreciate the effort you put into this map, it really deserves a lot of work. Like many have said, far too many of the boxes and key "structural" elements are out of alignment, and seemingly rushed and crudely done. Should you revise this map, I would suggest you try to create a more fitting hull design, perhaps involving some interlocking. I entertain no illusions that you didn't care about this map, but it truly deserves more care to do it justice. btw, for future reference, simply edit your previous post rather than double-posting.
thats what i did i never double posted buyt i have posted 4 difrent maps on this site -tower -pelican hanger -cliff side peak -Piller of Spring -War in the city
you think well once my xbox is fixed i will definatly interlock and make it infectionable also the v2 post will be out then of this but it will be a while to fix i of course so don't think over night