Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing This is my first post on forgehub so I would love some constructive critisicm instead of just 1/5 dumb, or 5/5 good. This is an asymetrical map set up for every gametype. There is a camp, red base, blue base, watchtower, and pond, and waterfall. The UNSC remade an abandoned warehouse into a Spartan training Facility, that the covenant want to train elites at. The UNSC says no and it turns into a war in a training facility Now for only thing anyone looks at, the pictures. ^Camp^ ^Waterfall^ ^Bridge connecting sides^ ^Blue Base^ ^Red Base^ ^Pond^(Barrier was not placed in there but moved when playing) Watchtower Please tell me what you think. Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing
The merging is a little sloppy... do you use walls and stuff for markers? But besides that the layout seems great, and you have some awesome ideas there.
Thanks for the comments, and yes I sometimes use walls for interlocking. This is my first actual serious map to.
Very, very good for a first post! I personally think the interlocking was great in most places, yes their are places where it needs to be cleaned up a little bit. and once they are, I'm sure it will shine out for how good it really is. Great first post, keep up the good work! Happy Forging! ~Randle $candal
Great post for your first map. It's a little difficult to get a feel for the map from your screens, but that tends to be the case with pretty much every post on this site. A note on the name, (At the risk of sounding like I'm trying to protect my own map name) I've noticed that numbers in a map's name don't really seem to go over well.
Wow, you got it right the first time. Usually takes others about five tries before they follow the rules lol. The map looks good for your first one especially. You interlocked a lot I can see, although some parts don't seem exactly spot on. An example could be the wall on the stairs because it looks like you can't just walk on to it. I like the pond, and the upper layout, and for a first-time map I'd give it a 5/5. But out of all the maps I've seen, I'd give it a 2.5/5.
Thanks for all the comments, and from looking threw a few maps here I can understand a 3/5 easily. I have been on here a while to waiting for account activation email, so I understands how to post a map.
i love the waterfall and teh aesthetic touches in this map. you did a okay job on the interlocking its sloppy but good layout and original 4/5
doesnt look bad some ideas are not original though and the merging is a little sloppy but nothing is perfect doesnt look too bad though
Not that I’m an interlocking pro, but with the bridges you should probably flip them over to get rid of the boarders.
sSmething was bugging me about this map and I couldn't quite put my finger on it. Now I know. The area under the bridges near rocket spawn seems completely devoid of cover. A few barrels, crates and/or pallets under there would help break up the lines of sight a little. Other than that, looks good. To Verno: both sides of all bridge units are perfectly flat, the silver ends are the only exception, (they slope down a bit) but the short "railing' on the top side of the bridge units is nothing more than eye candy.
I like the look of this map a lot. maybe too many turrets? Is it open enough to accomadate a ghost, or even a warthog?
Some areas look a bit sloppy. You could straighten some objects out and Interlock, place some cover, and maybe even Geo Merge. The layout looks pretty good though.