Come one, Come all to this Tragic affair...

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  1. Dutch Kid

    Dutch Kid Ancient
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    Wipe off that make up what's in is dispair
    So throw on the black dress and mix in with the lot
    You might wake and notice your somethin your not...

    Anyway I can recite MCR all day, but I'm here to present... duh duh duh duh!

    The Pilot Episode of Dutch Wrestling Films: UNSC Navy W.A.L.R.U.S.E.S.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKaWZiQspMs

    This a new Halo Machinima set in contemporary space, parrellel to the Master Chief saga. These unlucky United Nations Space Command troops are part of a special forces group known as the Navy W.A.L.R.U.S.E.S. (Water and Like River Urgent Emergency Squad)

    In the pilot you meet snotty and pomous leader, {not Sarge} but Major Wrestleman (Played by Wrestleman13) leads his kiss-ass sidekick {not Simmons} but Sergeant Dutch (Played by Dutch Kid) in special operation to get imperitive intel necessary for the war to end... yet the intel is not what you'd expect...

    NOTE:
    This is not copying Rooster Teeth's Red vs Blue or G4TV's Bob and Steve. Any character likenesses are classic characters (Like cocky leader, kiss ass assistant, stupid enemies, etc.) please do not flame, thank you

    This is the pilot (first) episode. Please do not flame on audio or video quality, plot holes, etc we will get better. This a test in popularity and our skills and needs.

    Credits:
    Production ~ Almighty Tallest Productions
    Film ~ Dutch Wrestling Films
    Stars ~ Wrestleman13 - Major Wrestleman
    Dutch Kid - Sergeant Dutch Kid
    Dutch Kid's Brothers - Guards
    Music~
    Thank You For the Venom
    My Chemical Romance
    Three Cheers For Sweet Revenge
    Warner Bros./Reprise Records
    Copyright 2004

    Visit us on the web at
    www.freewebs.com/dutchwrestlingfilms
     
  2. Tex

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    lololol MCR = My Chemical Romance for those who have never heard of them...

    Anyways not bad, but the sound quality is crap, you need to work on that for some more epic films, also, the "sneak" up on the 2 on the bridge part...rather sketchy...as well as the "take out the wall" part...just saying, not bad, but you have a few things to work on =]
     
  3. Dutch Kid

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    Ha, on the bridge part I was on the computer when my cousin started the scene and I pressed record a little late when we fired the launcher at the door. But ya our sound is way low.
     
  4. Tex

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    so wait, you've only got 2 people doing the multiple characters?

    no wonder they were standing still...(aswell as the guy at the "computer")

    you've got to animate them aswell man, to liven up the assassinations
     
  5. Dutch Kid

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    :) Read the opening comments. Don't flame on quality... just, well... uhh
    Its just me, Wrestleman and my two brothers. We would have a second one out but Wrestleman has been gone since the 10th, so I've been stuck!
     
  6. Reynbow

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    Dutch, no offense but you need to understand that he wasn't flaming you but rather giving you constructive criticism.

    I think what you need to try doing if you can only have 2 moving characters is to focus on something a little more simple. More in the style of RvB seeing how you don't need more then 2 characters moving at the same time.

    Try for something less action type. Because to be honest... That was hard to watch... Lol =\
     
  7. Dutch Kid

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    I know it was CC... And that was our first episode and we didn't want to start on a 'RvB Knockoff' kinda note.

    The one me and WM13 are planning is funny and very little action... A more of a meet the crew sorta thing
     

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