Help me make my map TEXT! (pleas look)

ok i made this txt for my new map but my English is far from perfect so could you get the flaws out of this text and correct them pleas? (BTW map coming soon)
Date: 27/28 June
also if this is on the wrong category please move it to the right one


Descalation
Map Layout
This map has 4 floors
1.The underground
2.The bases/some walkaways
3.the middle line of the map
4.The top of the sniper towers
Description:
The sight of view is taken from base B
i will now explain a bit over these floors
Floor 1:The underground

On the corners on the left there are stand 2 bases (which are floor 2)
there is 1 big stairs leading to the base around the base there is an
small path around it where you can walk. on the back of the base there are 2 creates which can be used as barrier or to get on the base. if you go near the middle left part there is an grav lift which will lead to an small platform on floor 2. if you go near to the tough middle there is an open double box going to the base an going to the near middle of the underground where the rocket launcher is then if you go a bit more to the right there is an bridge which will lead to floor 2 of the middle. if you go the the corner on the right side there is a nbridge leading to floor 2 whit an barrier made of an other bridge if you go further to the middle (not to far) there is an fence. if you go to the middle right part there is an health generator whit a defend of the barriers also there is an ghost on each base.

Floor 2:The bases/some walkaways

ok on the left corners of floor 2 there is an base whit so small defends. there is a bubble shield and 2 weapons on this base and if you go the the right of the base there is a cannon which will shoot you to the middle or to the other side of the map (depends on how far you are standing from the cannon) if you further to the middle of the left part there is an bridge leading to floor 3 and if you go a bit more to the middle there is an small platform where you get by going in the grav lift on this platform is an shotgun and you can go to the other side. if you go a bit more to the middle of floor 2 there is a medium platform above the rocket launcher there are 3 small hallways going near the platform of the shotgun there is a power drainer and a lift which will take you to the middle of floor 3 also there is an way to go the corners of floor 2. if you go more to the corners there is an platform whit a tower in the middle where you can walk around then if you go to the middle right part there is an overshield also there is an very small part which is the gap of floor 3 you can jump here if you are near the bridges which lead to floor 2 it has 2 creates so you can jump back to floor 3 and it has an radar jammer.

Floor 3:the middle line of the map

Floor 3 is the middle line of the map you can get here by the bridges on the base or by the gap of floor 3 on the left there is an platform made of fence boxes (under it is the shotgun) then there is an single box on the left of the whit the invisible power up on it. if you got to the right there is an squarish platform whit an hole in the middle
(here is the lift from floor 2) this platform has some barrier and 4 weapons (2 kinds) then if you go more to the right you have to jump cause of the gap on floor 3 if your then on the right part of floor 3 there is an sniper and 2 bridges leading to the sniper towers

Floor 4: the sniper towers

There isn't much to say about this it has the size of an single box
and its open so you can snipe clear but your also very vulnerable

Weapon/equipment layout:

The weapon layout is very balances there 3 power weapons: The shotgun ,Rocket launcher and the Sniper rifle
The shotgun is on the left of floor 2
The rocket launcher is on the middle of floor 1
The sniper rifle is on the right of floor 3
The rest of the weapons are equal shared on the map
The equipment: 2 bubble shield,1 radar jammer,1 health generator
1 bubble shield at each base on floor 2
the radar jammer is on the middle of floor 2
and the health generator is on the right of floor 1

Weapons/grenades on the map:

8x Battle rifle
1x Shotgun
1x Sniper
2x SMG
4x Spiker
2x magnum
4x Plasma rifle
2x needler
1x brute shotgun
1x rocker launcher
6x plasmade grenades
4x Spiker grenades

Gametypes:

This map is playable for all regular and costum game types
Players:
This map can be played for 2-10 people
it can be more but it will get a chaos then (which isn't always bad)
Some pictures of the map:
This is the cannon on the base


This is the right corner of the map

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This is an overview of the middle of the map


a other view of the middle


Last overview of the middle


here you can see the grav lift wich lead to the shotgun platform


Here you can see the bridges of the bases leading to the middle


Here you can see the middle of floor 1


Here you can see a base

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ok that's it i hope you guys will like the map
any suggestion will be welcome.
hope you will like the map!