Riftzeh submitted a new map: Garden - Guardian Remake/Re-imagine from Halo 3 Read more about this map...
Very rushed and lazy. Should not have posted this just to get a map on here first and actually try to put more effort into the map.
Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the maps you didn’t make than by the maps you did make. Walk on through the forest my friends, dream, discover, build.
Sorry, but I didn't have the intention of doing what you assumed I did. I also said I would love feedback. Saying it's rushed and lazy doesn't help me at all. Thanks for being rude.
Gotta say, the map looks amazing. I'm not too sure if the aesthetic change from Forerunner to UNSC will aid in the gameplay department. Plus, some of the changed geometry looks tacked on instead of seamlessly integrated. All in all, a decent rendition.
I suppose I just wanted to add some other mechanics to the map to fit Halo 5. I usually have a problem making rooms to big or too small compared to the originals so I added extra elements to sort of fix this problem and ended up doing that to the entire map so it wasn't exactly the same as the original. Thanks for the feedback though, going back, I see a lot of mistakes because I was up pretty late forging this. Will fix most issues and update it today.
You took maybe few hours to do this. You could have put a lot more effort into it Its not being rude if its true. If you think it needs work dont be in a rush to post it. The scale looks off, parts of it looks unfinished. That stair case is just floating there and that cage side looks unfinished. If it wasnt done then at least say WIP.
You make a good point. However, like I said, I wasn't rushing to be the first one here. I just wanted to share. I honestly never share my maps with people, and this is the first map I created that I decided to share. (Especially in the spirit of Halo 5's forge releasing.) I was planning to go back today and make changes because I posted it last night when I was really tired not thinking about minor details. (Such as saying WIP or something. I figured there would only be small errors such as placement issues and mechanics of the map, but if you think it's unfinished I will go back in and try to add more detail. Most of what you see is intentional but, Ill try my best to fix it. Also, as for scale, I wasn't trying to make an exact copy of the map, I was basing majority of the layout on it. --- Double Post Merged, Dec 17, 2015 --- Oh, and as for time frame. (me not being the best forger) It took me 8 upwards to about 12 hours to do. Taking breaks in between.
Good on you for looking for feedback mate, don't let people get you down. Can't wait to play the revisions!
I got to hand it to you on being able to build a map so quickly. I've yet to learn the controls, let alone the blocks. I would try and work a little bit more here my friend. Really explore what Halo 5's forge has to offer.
I disagree. Regardless on how he was the first to post a map is not important but the quality of the map is average to something of a first try at doing a re imaging of a map the community knows of. But look at it as a whole. The map itself is what he would wanted be happy he's sharing it.
Thanks for the feedback! I will definitely look into some of these suggestions and make appropriate changes.
Im sure this is not your first map you have ever created but probably the first you have ever posted on a public site. The internet is a rude, unwelcoming kinda wild so sometimes its hard to be brave enough to do so. Kudos to you because this will help you become a better forger. Let me sum of this up.....I think some of the repliers are trying to say it has potential but if you really want to see it soar there are things to consider....Keep forging, enjoy yourself and dont be afraid to post future content. Cheers, Merry Christmas. oh, looks like a map that is aspiring to be competitive and wih a bit more TLC will be worthy of other peoples looks. Im not going to add to much what I would considering doing structurally different because you are the author not I, but I would encourage you to play it some, stare at it some and...smack...probably something amazing will hit you. later
I would definitely start moving around and fixing open spots. There are A LOT of spaces that can be broken out of. also cover up places that have random blocks interlocking outside actual play space but can be seen so it doesn't look messy.