http://www.bungie.net/forums/posts.aspx?h3fileid=31406381 Its just a minor remake of Midship from halo 2, my first forged map hope you like.
Ok new pics up and this may not be the place to put this but you should also check this out http://www.bungie.net/forums/posts.aspx?h3fileid=36403160 super crazy stick (plz rate)
Looks pretty well thought out however might i consider looking through http://www.forgehub.com/index.php?pageid=forging101 to learn the basics?
Very few people's first maps are a success. Although make another version of the map by checking out the Forging 101 section here on Foorgehub, it will definetly help you out. And Welcome To Forgehub