Me again, This time with a shaded pen sketch. More anime, this time using the chibi (small) art style. Shaded with a standard ballpoint. Reference: Spoiler There are some bits I dislike, such as the black clothing shading and the lower area around her dress. I'm really proud of the hair, especially on her head, coming to a crown in the middle so neatly. Tell me how bad it is. Go.
Her eye to cheek size ratio is off. her eyes need to b larger andher cheeks need to be smaller. Other than that, you already said you dont care for the shading on the clothing, so i dont realy need to cover that. One last thing... pupils are a nono on chibi, unless you are doing a manga sttle chibi; in which case it would look a whole lot different (the stock isnt manga). The lack of obvious pupils is to boost how kawaii it is. That said, i love the last zelda in your signature.