BRS

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  1. Auburn

    Auburn a dope soul
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    Revisiting an older style and working with renders some more. I cannot seem to find a good place for the text and the right side looks sketchy, but I was being lazy :p

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    CnC pls. Anybody is free to use it, if you'd like.
     
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  2. SilentJacket

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    whom is that, and what is she pointing at me?
     
  3. DC

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    It seems alittle to dark, i can't really make out whats happening, so it's confusing to look at, if i could see the stock or something i might be able to figure out what it is, but other than that i can see some flow going on haha. Also the blue next to her eye kind of throws me off, it might just be because of the darkness.
     
  4. Monolith

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    The surrounding dark blue space is a little strange, yet unique. A little overkill on the smudge like on her chest imo, but it's not very noticeable. Nicely done A++
     
  5. Eightball

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    I like the colors, but I could hardly see her arm, and I don't know what the hell she's pointing at me. :p

    Still, very nice, Auburn. I can't do this myself lol.
     
  6. Auburn

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    Thanks guys. I was trying to take emphasis off her chest with the smudging :p Anybody know how to unsmudge stuff? I brightened it up some and did work on the flame to make it, hopefully, less noticeable.

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  7. SilentJacket

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    but... everyone likes boobies.


    my original question still stands.
     
  8. ♥ Sky

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    :O BRS. Great anime. So deep and meaningful.

    • I don't like the way her skin tone has gone all yellow and zombiefied.

    • I also dislike the original render, although the pose is pretty awesome.

    • The way it fades to black is cool, although it's kinda curved one side but not the other, it would look cooler if it was curved both sides.

    • The blue accents the image well matching the characters colour in the anime.

    For the un-initiated in the world of anime: Black ☆ Rock Shooter (also the name of the character in question) is about fighting emotional battles which are fought metaphorically by each characters "avatar" per se. Each avatar fights another avatar when the two characters in the real world are having emotional difficulties between each other.
     
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  9. Auburn

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    Black Rock Shooter and her cannon thing.

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    Less zombie skin, couldn't do much about the right side though. Thanks Sky.
     
    #9 Auburn, Oct 9, 2012
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