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  1. Auburn

    Auburn a dope soul
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    I tried to incorporate flow, it didn't turn out right. The text is meh too, haha.

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  2. SilentJacket

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    where's my sig?, JK

    I like it, what is the stock from?
    Also, yeah, you should probably rework the Text Placement, and perhaps make it more transparent.
     
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  3. Halo Orlando

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    I feel like the entirety of the signature is in one place, which is in the left where there is a square made up of the two walkers and the text, the rest is basically dead space. I would rework the position of your focal, and if you are working on flow, try add some movement to the piece, lines going in a consistent direction, moving your eyes around the piece.

    In your piece, I see a few lines, such as the faint wind effect and the glacier/town area, but they aren't guiding the eye anywhere, so I think that needs work.
     
  4. Auburn

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    Thanks much Orlando and Silent. I honestly have no idea what to do with the text, it never comes out right.

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    Lost the xcf, so I had to start over and the text looks worse, haha. The effects don't feel right this time either.
     
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  5. SilentJacket

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    I'd go with one, fast moving snow is just a strange contrast to the assumingly slow, bulky machines.
     
  6. Monolith

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    Kinda like two, though you could really blend the text in better :p
     
  7. SilentJacket

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    If you are going to use the second one, shouldn't you make the machines look more beat up?
     
  8. Auburn

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    I would if I knew how :p

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    I lost the GIMP file, so I'm just pasting effects on it at this point. It's not really working, lol.
     
  9. SilentJacket

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    IMO this one is the best
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