The Outcast episode 1 new episode every sunday The Outcast: Episode 1 (Halo:Reach Machinima) - YouTube come check it out if ya enjoy it like share and subscribe it helps out <3
Umm...I liked...the fact that it gave me lots of screenshot effect ideas? Right off the back i noticed a few things people will pick up on see and immediately stop watching such as very bad voice acting.bad body acting(such as when he was crouching on the top of the bar thing near the end his foot was sticking off.thats just commen sense not to do.scripting was awkward.people were given lines to say that nobody in real life would say.oveall I found the video not enjoyable it had a nice theme of the guy being shunned by everybody else because he had all these powers and he was different just like a super hero movie.anyways work on your scripting get better voice and body actors and this might be enjoyable (nothing said above was meant to be harsh but I will not lie on what I thought.it was merely my opinions and giving you feedback and advice)
thank you for the feedback. I will keep working on my script writing skills since this is my first machinima cant expect perfection lol <3 i wasnt much of a fan of the first episode too The secound episode out on sunday is a much better quality.