Sorry for the late edit i have included a image. Bare in mind this is my first Halo reach map so i do appreciate the feedback. try not to be to harsh if you find out either the map could seem if it is not up to your standard. Map Description: Alongside the vast landscape that resides on the halo ring a Facility is located amongst the waterfall Spartans are brought here to battle against each other to determine which are the alpha spartans I decided to use one image as i didnt want to show off everything in the map but the image just about shows you what it looks like Made by Me and my brother Hope you enjoy
You should have created a screenshot before you created this thread, no-one will download without screenshots... How to post screenshots
Thats debatable whether or not people will download, but regardless, this post is not upto standards. I'm going to lock the thread to prevent further posts. Once you have a picture for the thread, Private Message either me or another moderator to have your topic re-opened for editing. LOCKED (also, you shouldn't mark your map for every gametype if they aren't applicable.)
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pictures late reply but there is at least one preview pic i didnt really want to supply more pictures as i dont really want to give away to much of the map
It looks somewhat decent for a beginner. But you use objects to naturally. Try and use pieces in ways that look better and dont include as many bridges into your map. Nobody like a long walk, while getting gunned down
There is too many bridges and too many pre-made buildings as the design can cause plenty of cross map fights with Team Snipers or Slayer DMR or Swat. These are atleast what I'm seeing in the single picture that doesn't help much because the design lacks much needed elements, more space and not bridges, less vehicles which would be easily able to kill someone of the ground, and more cover because the map will have too much cross map fights which many players don't like in a map. And it does look good for a beginner though, welcome to Forge Hub!
It looks like, from the one picture we get to see, that there aren't enough escape routes if you are getting gunned at. Also add more cover. If you are going to keep the bridge plan then add more bridges connecting to more platforms. It looks like there is only one way to get to some platforms and that isn't good. But the most important thing is add cover on at least the platforms. Maybe if you were to delete some bridges and put to long tunnels together to walk through. Just an idea though. This could be a really fun map to play on if you make some little changes. Good luck
Thanks for the Constructive Critism i dont think i will return to this map anytime soon, partly because i dont know how im going to upload the new file onto this website since Bungie.net is no longer updating the service record if someone can show me how i can do this then i probably could re-edit the map the reason why i couldnt really do much with this map is because it is built ontop of water there is no grid or anything to stop you from drowning , it wasnt built in minds for games like team sniper or team swat because i know it would'nt end well. there isnt as many vehicles as you think with their only being 2 falcons i choose these to mix up my gameplay so players wouldnt get bored of the same style of play. I have realised there is hardly any cover this is mainly rookie mistakes At the moment i am currently working on a new Map its Nearly finished and im looking for some testers to help me decide where to put some weapons and what decor i should use to make it look more complete if you want to help pm your gamertag or add one of my profiles and download and play through the map and then message that profile what you think it needs. Bare in mind it is using the space above the inside like structure so it will be small but i think you will love it