Quite possibly my only decent sketch. Ignore her left eye, disproportioned head, and hand Criticism pls?
Pretty sweet dude, any chance we could see the reference images you used? One little thing: Anime eyes don't join up at the sides and the tops are usually quite thick. I'm sure someone else could explain it better.
Spoiler The eyes were the hardest part to get right. No matter how many times I tried making them perfect, they came out lame D: Gracias Sky.
Make them bigger. Remember that anime eyes are dis-proportionate to the rest of the face as they're used to show most of the character's emotions.
dont waste your time copying anime, all you're doing is training yourself to draw wrong proportions, training yourself to copy someone else, and becoming another boring anime fan art person
What titmar said. If you're going to draw anime at least be original. If you're set on doing line art at least make the lines consistant, they're super fuzzy.