Yaay you finally figured out how to do this correctly just remember not to start spamming on the effect or it will become boring... Fast
This looks like a great photo I wish I knew how to make that effect, what I like the most about it is you're not just standing there like most of the people do with this effect.
I agree with FacePalm 100% and I also wish I knew how to do this awsome effect. I guess it could be better with more "streaks" on the right side.
I have also done this effect and i did find though that it became boring very fast. Try not to do it to much like I did so that its always fresh.