Two Rivers

Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by Crusader Vl, Feb 23, 2012.

  1. Crusader Vl

    Crusader Vl Forerunner

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    Description:
    this is my first true forge I have been forging for a while and spent quite some time on this map. It is compatible with the majority of gametypes. Infection itself has its own special touch as well I want true feedback on this map as its the first map Ive truly spent time on.

    Weapons:
    2x Dmr
    2x needle rifle
    2x plasma repeater
    2x assualt rifle
    2x plasma pistol
    1x spartan laser
    1x shotgun
    1x snipe
    1x grenade launcher

    Infection:
    Infection has a zombie cage that sits above the map where all the zombies spawn. They will remain in the cage for 30 seconds until they are teleported out at the same time the map goes from default forge lighting to the screen shot below.

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    Just another screenshot:
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    #1 Crusader Vl, Feb 23, 2012
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  2. EpICx ReMiX XD

    EpICx ReMiX XD Forerunner

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    This is a pretty good map for your first time Crusader. I liked the asthetics of the map and really liked the idea of infection when all the brain eating zombies spawn in a cage above the whole map. But here's one thing that you should know when you building maps in the future. Try not to use the buildings because it give's a bit of slack with the effort you put on to the map. I'm just giving you a advice in the future. Other than that you've done a good job of making this map. - EpICx ReMiX XD
     
  3. iamluke21393

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    Looks pretty cool. I gave it a download. I don't know when I'll get around to testing it with my friends, but if it stands out I'll let you know.
     
  4. Crusader Vl

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    Thats perfectly ok and i dont take offense to criticism in the slightest. For the bases themselves the buildings I used were for the look it gave not the effect as for the corner pieces where I used the bunker rounds that was mostly not knowing what else to put there. thanks for the feedback.
     
  5. bullet2thehead9

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    This map is interesting I like some of the aesthetic pieces you have used like the circular ramp as a drain for the water but I suggest maybe making the stream for the water thinner because right now it looks like it could interfere with game play and it will make it so you don't need to place the rocks. Also I agree with ReMix because buildings map the map look rushed and sloppy like you you didn't have time to make buildings for you own but I do like your use of the triple roomed building it looks good where it is I just don't like the bunker rounds they look horrible. Besides that I like the map and I would like to say welcome to forgehub.
     
  6. wpcubs

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    Its great that we are getting new people to forgehub! Pretty solid map, I like the water in it. Consider building up each of the bases to make it look more like a building. Otherwise than that, great map!!!
     
  7. Crusader Vl

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    I appreciate all the feedback I have never joined a community that is instantly friendly. Glad that those that have played the map like it. The constructive criticism will be noted and my next map will be better I hope. =P
     
  8. DTW Ghost

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    I have downloaded your map. It looks very interesting. I will test it with friends on Friday. I am a big fan of using water on maps. Do you use the standard infection gametype with this, or did you make your own custom settings?
     
  9. Shik

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    Feedback, take off the purple FX.
     

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