First things first, waaay too underexposed. If you did it for effect, that's not the way you should go about it. Lighten it up so people can see the image.. Also, the text placement is in the corner and should normally be placed somewhere near the focal. If you'd like to get started in graphics, I suggest you look up some tutorials. This will help you narrow down and gain some experience with graphics. Either you can google some, look at the FH graphics tuts, or look at the resource thread. Good luck