While this isn't the first map I've done, it is the first where I got away from using primarily premade buildings and instead incorporate those into a larger structure. Tight quarters inside the map contrast with the open space of the complex's roof and outer perimeter. This map is primarily for FFA slayer, but team slayer could work also, especially doubles or 3 vs 3. I added hill markers, and CTF could be an option in a future version.
Looks pretty good for a rookies first post. Personally I would not have the map leading out onto the roof. You should make objects fit together more smoothly (it looks a little compact) Well you learn from your mistakes...Welcome to Forge Hub!
Thanks for the feedback. There is a teleporter that leads to a little outpost up in the cliff with a sniper rifle. I thought the roof would be fun for a little side fighting and getting out of the building, which is compact. Also with a jet pack someone can jump off from the outpost and come down with the grenade launcher. There is a walkway that leads around the back to two teleporters, one goes to the outpost. The other one goes to one of the caves I have blocked off where the sword is. I'm sure I'll do some more sophisticated stuff though, so thanks for checking it out.
For future note, you need to include a thumbnail image of your map as stated in the site guidelines. i set your first picture as the thumbnail, but feel free to change it!
Thanks for fixing that. I did add a different image initially but it didn't post and I couldn't figure how to edit that part.