Hmm I couldn't really decide for the text on this, tell me which you think is best, and CnC on the rest please: This was the original message But I didn't really like how "wait for me" looked And there is also the version without text. I personally like it without text, but thoughts?
I like the one without the text. But that's just me. Question: What is that bright white thingy to the right? It's a bit distracting. Otherwise, very well done.
I agree that text sucked, hence why I said myself I prefer the one without text. I believe in the original image this was in either a train or a car, and that light was something they were passing by. I honestly am not quite sure what you are talking about mace, with that karma's a ***** comment... EDIT: The only reason I actually posted the version with text is one of my friends watched me make this, and said that he liked the text, normally I would just post the version I liked.
Frag Man. Sorry that stock reminds me of him so much. And wow Mace great cnc there bro. Anyway, he looks over sharpened, however I'm using you wanted it simple yet for this kinda deal it's not a good idea and isn' working nice. The blurring seems abit eh too. Outside the window the blur is really powerful and then is still within the house and he seems abit on places too. I like the idea of what you wanted to do with the text but yeah it didn't really turn out nice though. Nice attempt atleast. Overall, not really that well this time mate :/.
I like the first one, but an idea to make the text more interesting would be to maybe separate and jumbled... can't really think of a good way to explain it, so I found a pic that kind of illustrates what I'm talking about. Note how the letters are sort of all over the place. If you did this with the text in your sig, but made it a bit more mixed up in size and location, it would make it look more like a sporadic, desperate though, which is what it looks like you're trying to portray with the repeated lines "I will come." Also, have you got stocks? Would be interesting to see what you've done to it. EDIT: Also, not to advertise my own crap, but the following is one of my old sigs from a forum of yesteryear which I think shows my point a little better. Hope my thoughts help.
The light on the left is the characters belt buckle shining and the light reflecting onto the window of the car he is riding in. FYI. Also, I like the version without text best. Maybe if you made it look like the window was fogged up and someone wrote it with their finger on the inside of the window. Just an idea.