Razerwater Circuit

Discussion in 'Reach Race Maps' started by water x maniac, Sep 15, 2011.

  1. water x maniac

    water x maniac Forerunner

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    Hey everyone
    after a bit of a break from forging and playing some newly released games i felt like making another map. I always enjoy a good race map so i went about creating my own, so i give you Razorwater circuit.

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    The start is located in alaska, there is a timed start set for 7 seconds. from here you race over a jump into montana.

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    Once in montana you go past a volcano and up a ramp to a lefthand turn and head towards the canyon.

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    At the end of this straight there is a jump into the canyon. This is the biggest jump. i have spent hours testing and tweaking this jump to make it good as posible. I refused to use a sheild door at the landing ramp as i wanted to make a nice fast flowing track without to manny objects that slowed your pace down.

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    The track then turns left into the twisted straight.

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    At the end there is a sharp hairpin turn then the track leads under the twist and up on the other side and jumps over the entrance.

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    From here the track curves up to the start and the lap is complete.

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    I hope you enjoy this track as i enjoyed making it and racing it with freinds.
    thanks to IXR4z0RSTr1K3XI and IxC0RRUPT1ONxI for astetic aditions and help perfecting jumps

    Water x Maniac
    enjoy
     
  2. SPL4TTERMAN

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    I really like that spiral tunnel, it makes the map really neat. A few pointers, first, I'd try to stick to one "peice" per section, ex: using all bridge peices for one section, all walls for another, all blocks for another, etc. Secondly, if you have the word water in the title, it sort of implies that it will be near or on water. And third, I'd suggest removing the volcano, which looks very unfitting and unrelated, and remaking the stoplight, which is a bit too large, and is mounted on an overly-long railing.
     
  3. zX BATTERY Xz

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    Wow, the spiral tunnel looks great. If I was to make one addition to the map, it would be to the volcano, since it looks like the lava is flowing from it, you shouldve found a way to make the lava flow onto the track without slowing the driver. It would have added alot to the aesthetics to the map. All in all, a great map.
     
  4. Therenownedpuppy

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    The beginning wall could be straighter and the curved turn at the very end could be a little smoother. Other than that its a great map. Ill download it and check the gameplay for framerate issues.
     

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