I seem to remember a conversation in which your "friend" forged this map. What was his name again, "Josh Nguyn", yeah, that was it It seems you sir, are found out. On topic, I do like the changes you made from v1, but it still seems like some work need be done.
It isn't perfect, but is in no way a bad replica. I do think you could've added more detail, but hey you're learning and this is going to be one step closer for you to perfecting this style of forging and aesthetics. Keep it up.
Very nice. It's impressive because whilst Grim may make it look easy, it is very difficult to Forge humanoid figures (Trust me, I've tried). Anyways, his head looks kinda small and he looks unnaturally stiff. Beyond that, very nice work.