I really enjoyed this map overall. Not a perfect 1x1 remake, but that is a good thing! To be honest, I am about sick of guardian re-imaginations, but this one felt different! Placing it near the water really added that extra bit of greatness. Now I will address the problems I had with the map. First up would have to be the waterfall! It is not only a major cause of frame-rate drop, but also very annoying to hear in the background! I would suggest moving your entire map, which would greatly improve frame-rate. Also, z-fighting is a bit deal on this map! Now, most maps are going to have a bit of z-fighting here and there, but it is a major problem on this map. Your center is covered with z-fighting, blue room/hallway has major z-fighting, and bottom Yellow has considerable z-fighting! This is an easy fix, just by nudging objects up and down. Please do this! Lastly, I do not like your lift going from green to camo. For some reason you stacked two light man-cannons, and this was just unnecessary. Stacking the man cannons result in shooting you high up in the air and leaving one utterly exposed to the sniper. Delete one of those and I think it would work great! Well, those are my suggestions. I really enjoyed this map, and would like to see an improved version!
Ah, Z-fighting was a problem in my older versions, but I have fixed those problems (and improved it significantly) in my most recent version (http://www.bungie.net/Stats/Reach/FileDetails.aspx?fid=21284566&player=W0lf Gamer) Also moving the entire map would just be too much to do ... I might do it eventually when I map out pieces and where they go.
Okay, I want to say nice job with your most recent version. Z-fighting is now to a minimum, aesthetics look better, and you utilized pieces better as well. I do, however, have another picture album with more feedback to give. Hope you find it useful again! imgur Note: if you would like any additional help, just message me online.
Version 1.7 is now done (Fixes/tweaks/pictures updated in OP) DL Link to V1.7 = Bungie.net : Halo Reach : File Details