Beretta

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by spartansniper619, Jun 28, 2011.

  1. spartansniper619

    spartansniper619 Forerunner

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    Yo !

    This is my first map !

    I try to do a beretta repliqua, but I could not finish the other side, I did not have enough resources...

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    I hope you enjoy it !


    (i'm french, sorry for my english...)
     
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  2. BiaxialEMPEROR

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    Ain't that cold, don't ya think? Not even a "welcome to Forgehub" or anything? Lot of encouragement, for sure.

    Anyway, You've got a pretty interesting map here, and it's pretty accurate to the real thing. Anyway, you probably should do what Mr. Freeze says up there. Hate to see another interesting map get locked up.
     
  3. ZipZapZop

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    That looks gorgeous. Seriously though, great job. One thing I can advise is to make it a little bit smaller so you can detail both sides, and also maybe use an FX or something, that'll help give it a more "metallic" look. Great work though.
     
  4. Exile

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    This place isnt exactly known for its loving community...


    Great map, very original aswell.
     
  5. xSoGx Grim

    xSoGx Grim Commander

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    Very, very impressive. However I would like to see some type of background write up for this. Tell us more about the weapon, its place in history, how many rounds does the clip hold/ verlocity..etc. In this community its all about establishing your own style or field of focus. You may have a good thing going for you right here. Looking forward to more content from you.
     
  6. SquidMan33

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    Yes I would agree. To attract more views and fans try to make your post seem professional. Right up a Paragraph that talks about things such as inspiration and things about your map. Nice job though.
     
  7. spartansniper619

    spartansniper619 Forerunner

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    Thanks everybody ! :D thank you for the advice !

    but I'm not very at ease in English... so to tell a story is not that great...

    I'll put more screenshot today ;)

    And thanks again ! :D




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  8. NinjaDeLaNoches

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    awesome replica..... absolutely gorgeous
     

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