first off, terrible name. second, you need a description otherwise this thread will be locked, third, the map looks very... well i cant realy tell from the three pics you gave, the first pic shows a room with only one way out which is not good for map flow, and i cant get anything out of the second and third pic. post a overview pic, and a weapon list would be nice. oh yeah... WELCOME TO FORGEHUB!
Did you mean FRAGMENTATION? Also, maybe a map overview or action shots? 2- 16 players doesnt give a good idea of the map.
I agree with most of this except for the fact that the 1st and 3rd pictures show the same building i.e. there are two ways out not just one...