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Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by UltimateBeast17, Jun 4, 2011.

  1. UltimateBeast17

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    Even after centuries of careful inspection, the true purpose of this primitive sanctury is unknown. Made by FrankenPanda and helped by RisingPhoenix17 and LigerLiquid. Two small bases are dwarfed to the North by a massive glass curved lift. To the North is a platform for open team combat. Made as part of The Phoenix Ascending Forge Guild Tribute Map Pack.
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    This was made by The Phoenix Ascending Clan Forge Guild as their first map pack if you like what you see, have any questions, or want to join message RisingPhoenix17.
     
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  2. Knight Of 0rder

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    There looks like there is too much stuff in one area. I would suggest taking out the buildings on either side. Buildings don't impress people plus they take up a lot of space on the map. I would much rather see your own smaller building forged in that area.

    Also are there any problems with framerate. You can look across almost the whole map, and you added lights which severely increase framerate issues.

    I do like the green struts. They are a nice addition to make the map a little more pleasing to the eye.
     
  3. Equin0x

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    I agree with Knight, here. The map seems a little cluttered with too many structures. My advice: Move the glass cover walls to the side, with a type of platform for it. I would suggest having a tunnel underneath the platform, or just have many ways to get up. Also in agreement with Knight, the lights will most likely cause severe framerate issues. Overall not bad for a first(?) map post.

    PS: lol at it having my name ;)
     
  4. Robert Jonez

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    I agree with everyone else. It feels to cluttered (This is just from the pictures) I will DL and look at it later. But what really caught my eye was the frame that the green light was in. It looks awesome!
     

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