Pibel's Quills

Discussion in 'Reach Casual Maps' started by JKBUK, May 25, 2011.

  1. JKBUK

    JKBUK Forerunner

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    This is the first map I've decided to follow through on and have shared here on forgehub. I will by no means claim to be an expert map maker; I am not. But I have spent a decent amount of time trying to create maps and looking over player-made maps.

    I am looking for criticism. I want to know everything that catches your eye, everything that you like, but most importantly, everything that bugs you.

    I made the core of this map on this location before I was even aware of the map Bungie uses in matchmaking (I don't know it's name off the top of my head) that is in the same location, so I wasn't trying to copy anything based on that map, I swear <3

    Tell me any changes you would make to this map. Please and thank you!
    -JKBUK

    THE MAP
    CAVE BASE
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    INSIDE
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    OUTSIDE
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    THE MIDDLE
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    ISLAND BASE

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    Notes:
    -Why is it called Pibel's Quills? I don't know. I mashed on the keyboard, and the result was very similar to those words, so I used them. Feel free to suggest names as well.


    -My goal was to have a cave vs building CTF game. Originally, I had planned to have a medium/large tower over where the dam pathway thing hits the ocean water, but I quickly realized I wouldn't have the funds and scrapped the idea.
     
    #1 JKBUK, May 25, 2011
    Last edited: May 25, 2011
  2. smithspot

    smithspot Forerunner

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    1) Welcome to the community. You can definitely find honest feedback for your maps here.

    2) You have to post pictures of your map in your original post in this community. If you don't your thread my be locked and/or deleted.

    If you are unsure of how to post pictures to your thread please follow the direction listed here
     
  3. JKBUK

    JKBUK Forerunner

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    Thank you for your help, I should have looked into how to post a map a little more thoroughly before I did.
     
  4. newbieninja2

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    welcome to forgehub! love the unique bases, looks like the middle needs more cover, also, also what is the weapon placement?
     
  5. JKBUK

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    The weapon placement is pretty average, with the rocket and plasma launcher in the middle, with each base having a sniper and shotgun, with DMRs scattered throughout the map. The island base has a grenade launcher, while the cave base has a focus rifle.
     

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