Excite Goose Track 001

Discussion in 'Reach Race Maps' started by MASSAIKUR, May 15, 2011.

  1. MASSAIKUR

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    this track is inspire by the game excite bike, pretty basic track concept just race forward hit ramps go thru teleporter at the end of the track and repeat. this my first track took me awhile to make it and any constructive criticism is welcome.

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    YouTube - excite goose track preview

     
    #1 MASSAIKUR, May 15, 2011
    Last edited: May 16, 2011
  2. Froberts

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    The map itself looks pretty good, I haven't seen anything like it before. But just as a bit of advice for movies, try to stay on one person and not circle around them. It may be a cool effect, but it doesn't show off your map very well.
     
  3. MASSAIKUR

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    yeah i did get a little carried away when making the preview movie for the track lol
     
  4. SquidMan33

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    I like the track. The beguining is very creative: the green light and red light and also the pop up out of the mongoose holders. Great use of shield doors and grav lifts. But the video was kinda hard to watch.
     
  5. MASSAIKUR

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    yeah I watched a CruelLEGACEY tutorial for the grid idea, also just reup the video should show track off better no crazy camera lol
     
  6. newbieninja2

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    looks like a sweet terrain map, love the explosion start, gonna dl
     
  7. Bl0odshadow

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    I like the concept of the map, it isnt usually done so kudos for that!

    Although overall it isnt my taste just because of the large possibility of flipping the mongoose, which can drive me crazy :p
    Nicely done overall though :)
     
  8. MASSAIKUR

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    I did spend alot of time making the ramp angles work with the mongoose but that mongoose just likes to flip :/
     
  9. Forgefire

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    I do question what you do with this map, Like what are the force fields for? And it seems to be a small thing, I feel like you still have tons of recourses left in this. It isn't that detailed, but it is still good. BUt I do love how you make the starting position though, that is something I love.
     
    #9 Forgefire, May 17, 2011
    Last edited: May 17, 2011
  10. MASSAIKUR

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    the force fields help give the mongoose a better chance at landing on the tires
     

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