a chair

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Monolith, Apr 21, 2011.

  1. Monolith

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    Wanted to do something with a quote..

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    Erm, the stock is a chair

    CnC is welcome and appreciated.
     
  2. Zathura

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    Seeing as how you've got so much open space, you could probably enlarge the quote and make it a bit easier to read.

    Also, is that some smudged out text I see in the top right area? Might want to clean that up a bit more.

    It's a cute design though. I could see it as an illustration in a children's book or something.
     
  3. Dinosaur Drugs

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    I think you should make the chair more of a focal as it stands now the smudges are covering the bottom and its slightly blurry.
     
  4. Zathura

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    I believe the bottom of the chair is supposed to be missing, if you read the quote. Technically the back should be gone too, but then it would be unidentifiable as a chair at all.
     
  5. Xtermin8R645

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    Faded text to the right is a bit confusing, the chair was nicely blurred tho if it had legs the blur completely covers them. Also, the text is oversharpened imo.
     

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